Yuni arnida
NK2-10/17384
Describing Myself
Writing 1
My name is yuni
My name is Yuni arnida but everyone calls me Yuni. My name was taken from my parents name. Yuni is from June, Ar is from my father’s name is Arman and Nida is from Ida, she is my mother.
I was born in Jambi on June, 14th 1992. So, this year I am 19 years old. I am the third child in my family and I am only daughter too. The all of my sibling are boys. The first one my brother is Al. he has married and has two daughters. The second one is Af. He get married on April 3rd 2011. The last one is Ade. He is a student in senior high school.
I have black eyes and straight black hair. I am pretty tall around 170 centimeters and I am thin. I have a flat nose and tan skin. I have a birth mark under my eye on the left side.
I like to collect something like accessories and books. I like add accessories in my appearance because it can make me more confidence. The accessories like necklaces, bracelets and watch. Beside that, I like to collect books too. The books that I collect is comics. Because of that, I like to draw a picture and I have a dream to make a comic.
My personality is easy going. I like to have a lot of friends from all of the world. My principle is do not tease what someone else do but tease yourself if you cannot do. So, this is me, the only daughter and my name is Yuni.
haii yunn..
BalasHapus"Yuni from June, Ar from my father’s name is Arman and Nida from Ida, she is my mother"
i thinks "Yuni from June" can you put in the last statement in this paragraph, because
before the statemanet you write
"My name was taken from my parents name.Ar from my father’s name is Arman and Nida from Ida, she is my mother, and Yuni from june
thanks yunn.. :)
yuni..your essay so short..
BalasHapusplease wrote more information about you.
but i don't understand about the fist paragraph
"Yuni from June, Ar from my father’s name is Arman and Nida from Ida, she is my mother. "
what do you mean?
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yuni....
BalasHapusso far your essay is good enough,,
but keep pay attention about grammar, diction and punctuation mark,,,
that's from me!!
keep writing!!
:)
I am interesting with your essay...
BalasHapusbut be careful of grammar and choose the word...
"Yuni from June, Ar from my father’s name is Arman and Nida from Ida, she is my mother."
I think it is better "Yuni is from June, Ar is from Arman, my father, and Nida is from Ida, my mother."
keep writing..
:)
yuni....
BalasHapusso far your essay is good enough,,
but keep pay attention about grammar, diction and punctuation mark,,,
your essay is to short, right ?
give more information .
that's all from me :)